''"To me, an Oofficer is someone who maintains a professional bearing, someone who inspires their fellow soldiers, and someone who has a positive and powerful influence on others. Instilling guidance, respect, and leadership is something that all leaders should be doing in this military. At the moment, I can confidently say that I know how to lead others, and therefore I absolutely know that I have what it takes to be an Oofficer in the USDF. Qualities of an officer are in my nature;, such as tenacity, self-efficacy, a hard work ethic, leadership, and an appetite for learning. These are the attributes that allow me to lead by example and to be cautious with every judgment I make, and will make me as agood prospective Commissioned Officer.''"

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